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Monica A Leyva's avatar

Alex, this made me smile for all the right reasons. Beneath the wit is a thoughtful meditation on companionship and the ways we seek understanding wherever we can find it. I especially loved how the everyday moments—the supermarket aisle, the evening conversations, the familiar cadence of returning to "us"—made the poem feel both contemporary and timeless. Whether readers interpret it literally, metaphorically, or somewhere in between, you've written something that invites reflection without judgment. That's a difficult balance to achieve, and you do it beautifully.

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What a brilliant poem Alex! I really appreciate how you included your reading of it too! Oh I bet many are in love with their devices lol, always there, always loyal 😅

"There's poetry in your algorithm" - what a line!! Now this made me stop and think!

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